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The Angel

I don’t want to close my eyes
I see your face when I do,
I don’t want to hear more cries
Why can’t I, for a minute, not think of you?

I’m sorry, God, I’m terribly sorry
I wasn’t there when you needed me
I was sulking in my own misery
I just didn’t know what it had to be.

It’d been two years—too long, too lonely
Yet I haven’t stopped dreaming of you
There wasn’t a time I haven’t been as guilty
How I wish I had died with you, too!

By now I could’ve been a father
If the cruel fate had not unfurled,
Chance, oh if I could only ask for another
I didn’t even know if you’d be a boy or a girl.

My baby, my precious little baby
I’m sorry, I could’ve loved you
Had I known your mother would kill you,
I could’ve stopped her, I might’ve saved you.
©2006-2009 ~elyBuendia
:iconelybuendia:

Author's Comments

Not a true story...completely imagination..^^

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:iconyour-temptation:
hmm all i can say is that it made me cry..this is great..nothing more to say..

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What about us?? :bye:
:iconelybuendia:
Hehe thanks...

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:damphyr: "Love is like telling a girl you like her smile and she wears it everyday."
:iconyour-temptation:
your welcome.. :)

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What about us?? :bye:
:iconsugarcube886:
thats deep. I have a friend who literally went thru that, and it sucks.

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Silence has it's own life, its ways of telling lies.
It's stories between thin lines; its secrets in disguise can leave conclusions running wild, turning logic to denial... bringing silence into life.
:iconelybuendia:
I'm sorry I don't have the experience first hand but I just can feel what a person endures faced with this.. Thanks for the :star:.^^

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:damphyr: "Love is like telling a girl you like her smile and she wears it everyday."
:iconkittyrose:
A sentimental subject but well written. You did a great job expressing this emotion and ones feelings about this subject.

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And I believe this may call for a proper introduction, and well
Don't you see, I'm the narrator, and this is just the prologue?
Panic! at the Disco
:iconelybuendia:
Thanks...Glad you liked it.^^

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:damphyr: "Love is like telling a girl you like her smile and she wears it everyday."
:iconthemaddpoetess:
Wonderful job.The poem had deep emotion and a steady flow.The tone was serious and sorrowful and truly touching.Good use of sensitive subject matter and almost an ambiguous mix between fantasy and reality.Excellent job!

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T.M.P
"Don't give up...You got the music in you."
:iconelybuendia:
Again, thanks for appreciating it...all of my poems I wrote in solitary confinement..^^..and some of them I published...but it's really gratifying to hear first-hand comments and critiques from someone not in my family... :glomp:

I sincerely thank you for taking time to read my works..^^

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:damphyr: "Love is like telling a girl you like her smile and she wears it everyday."

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