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I'm here
with all my bottled anger...
the smiles and hollow laughter
all but mock my wasted existence.

To you it seems
I have no fear...
Inside this shell,
I keep the tears.

You think you know me,
I envy you...
For I don't know how to be happy
so I make them unhappy.

I'm tired of this dupery,
of people taking pity...
thinking I am cold
when I am only sad...
©2006-2009 ~elyBuendia
:iconelybuendia:

Author's Comments

This is a short poem I made a couple years ago. It was one of those times I felt so alone and misunderstood... Hope you like it.

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:iconklit-shy:
i envy your memory...shet! limot ko na ata lahat nung mga obra-panitikn ko ^^

this one is really great. the emotion you wanna express is so vivid. maayo!

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i write. this is what i want.
and sometimes i write lyrics for boy bands.
:iconelybuendia:
Haha... I also have a very bad short memory. I easily forget names, dates, etc. But on my masterpieces, they're etched in my soul..asus.^^

Thanks!
:iconklit-shy:
echus!!! i expect a lot from u. =) do not fail me!!!! hala am injecting needles on your ass.haha

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i write. this is what i want.
and sometimes i write lyrics for boy bands.
:iconelybuendia:
Uh-uh...that sounds scarrrry. Uhm, I'll do my damnest to impress you edol...hehe
:iconklit-shy:
waaaaaaaaaaaah ^^

Do not wpri...I am but shallow ^^

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i write. this is what i want.
and sometimes i write lyrics for boy bands.
:iconthemaddpoetess:
It's a deep emotional piece with a good structure.The end seems a bit flat but otherwise its another gem.

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T.M.P
"Don't give up...You got the music in you."
:iconelybuendia:
As long as you see it as gem, I'm okay with it..^^
Thanks again! :glomp:

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:damphyr: "Love is like telling a girl you like her smile and she wears it everyday."
:iconhermeticangel:
:hug: certainly my favorite... here goes your soul

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"I'm all in favor of keeping dangerous weapons :jedi:out of the hands of fools. Let's start with typewriters." -- Frank Lloyd Wright :ninjabattle:
:iconhermeticangel:
i must agree that the end is a bit flat.. but the overall impact to me is strong.. love it, really :thumbsup:

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"I'm all in favor of keeping dangerous weapons :jedi:out of the hands of fools. Let's start with typewriters." -- Frank Lloyd Wright :ninjabattle:

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